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Hi Dave...Glad to see you (again).
Solitude - great time for reflection.
Did you ever take that writing class you spoke of?
They say there is a poet in every man...but should have added
more so in some than others wink Mr. Byrd was was not only a poet in prose
but a philospher to boot. He certainly got man's oneness with the universe
on course...but being an explorer...well....

I'm sure you'll love ISBN13 9780871401526 biggrin

“We do not believe in ourselves until someone reveals that deep inside us something is
valuable, worth listening to, worthy of our trust, sacred to our touch. Once we believe
in ourselves we can risk curiosity, wonder, spontaneous delight or any experience that
reveals the human spirit.”
― E.E. Cummings
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Whilst reading Robert Frost works, and researching their meanings, I have found a string that ties him in with many other poets, and writers. Shakespeare worked with this to be or not to be, concerning after life.
Frost has one thinking, if I have unbearable problems, and this mountain is too steep to climb, what would happen if I end my life. Would this, or that, be the end of all, or would my problems just go on ahead, and be waiting for me to arrive.
Many poems, from many poets pens, address this query.
I think I will scoot over to some colorful Fall leaves descriptions, for a time.
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That E.E Cummings quote is one of the rules of raising children. A kind word, a pat on the head, encouragement seems to do wonders. It helps some of us elderly children also.

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It's arrived
I'm gone
Please,
wait
for
me
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Sighs of Autumn Rain
Du Fu

In autumn rain, the grasses rot and die,
Below the steps, the jueming's colour is fresh. (senna)
Full green leaves cover the stems like feathers,
And countless flowers bloom like golden coins.
The cold wind, moaning, blows against you fiercely,
I fear that soon you'll find it hard to stand.
Upstairs the scholar lets down his white hair,
He faces the wind, breathes the fragrance, and weeps
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"Sighs of Autumn Rain"....Great title! biggrin ...

Reminded me of this poignant one by Mary Frye:

Do not stand at my grave and weep,
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sunlight on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry,
I am not there; I did not die.
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Escape From Public Life

Returning to Live in the South (I)
Tao Qian

When young, I'd not enjoyed the common pleasures,
My nature's basic love was for the hills.
Mistakenly I fell into the worldly net,
And thus remained for thirteen years.
A bird once caged must yearn for its old forest,
A fish in a pond will long to return to the lake.
So now I want to head to southern lands,
Returning to my fields and orchards there.
About ten acres of land is all I have,
Just eight or nine rooms there in my thatched hut.
There's shade from elms and willows behind the eaves,
Before the hall are gathered peaches and plums.
Beyond the dark and distance lies a village,
The smoke above reluctant to depart.
A dog is barking somewhere down the lane,
And chickens sit atop the mulberry tree.
The mundane world has no place in my home,
My modest rooms are for the most part vacant.
At last I feel released from my confinement,
I set myself to rights again.
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Escape From Public Life

Returning to Live in the South (I)
Tao Qian

When young, I'd not enjoyed the common pleasures,
My nature's basic love was for the hills.
Mistakenly I fell into the worldly net,
And thus remained for thirteen years.
A bird once caged must yearn for its old forest,
A fish in a pond will long to return to the lake.
So now I want to head to southern lands,
Returning to my fields and orchards there.
About ten acres of land is all I have,
Just eight or nine rooms there in my thatched hut.
There's shade from elms and willows behind the eaves,
Before the hall are gathered peaches and plums.
Beyond the dark and distance lies a village,
The smoke above reluctant to depart.
A dog is barking somewhere down the lane,
And chickens sit atop the mulberry tree.
The mundane world has no place in my home,
My modest rooms are for the most part vacant.
At last I feel released from my confinement,
I set myself to rights again.
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Did you ever take that writing class you spoke of?


Hi Beverly

I did look up the local classes but they are all during the working day and it seems, locally, to be used as part of Cognitive Therapy.

So I've bought a good notepad and a special pen that writes poetry instead.

Currently being taught by a master, this is unfurling the pages of a dusty book.

Dave
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@NAP2614 - Have researched the Chinese poets and delighted by their life observations - Somewhat different yet familiar similarities.
Thanks for such interesting global variety, Neil! I welcome more smile

@ David Autumns - Your finger snapped like a whip to my ears, Dave.
Apparently, like the mesmerizing metronome, 'can't hear' keeps repeating a
sad refrain. Well written! rose
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I researched an assortment of Japanese poets, and their works. When I translated into English, they were butchered, and found it impossible to stick with the original text. Their pivot words throw us off and cannot be used as the original poets used them. I tried one from 626 AD and made a royal mess of it.
It appears Romance Languages cross translate the best. I wish I had taken Latin 1-2- and 3 whilst I was taking Spanish.
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