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bjbdbest
Master Cruncher Joined: May 11, 2007 Post Count: 2333 Status: Offline Project Badges:
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@alged...Merci beaucoup for your Autumn Poem!
----------------------------------------The addition of poison brought a new twist to what posted previously. I found a poor translation - perhaps you can do it better. Autumn crocuses - William Apollinaire. Meadow is poisonous but pretty in autumn Cows grazing there Slowly poison themselves The colour autumn crocuses of safron and lilac Decorate with flowers your eyes they are as this flower Purplish as the ring and as this autumn And my life for your eyes slowly poisons itself The children of the school come with a crash Dressed of surcoat and playing the harmonica They pick the autumn crocuses which are as mothers Daughters of their daughters and are colour of your eyelids Beating like flowers flutter in the wind denies The security guard of the herd sings very slowly While slow and bellowing cows leave Forever this great evil pre flowered autumn. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- NAP2614, It's my pleasure to get to know you and relish the wisdom you impart. May life continue to treat us well - for every day is a wondrous gift. Beverly |
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David Autumns
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"and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart"
----------------------------------------Thanks Beverly and e.e. ![]() |
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bjbdbest
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"and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart" Thanks Beverly and e.e. "Only the sky understands Words folded in its midst Love...unrequited Whispers" ![]() |
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alged
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"I found a poor translation - perhaps you can do it better."
----------------------------------------No no i cannot . For me it's a good translation, the melancholy is there; even though each language has its own tone. Poetry is as much human as universal Thanks very much. Waiting to read more from you and others in that "poetic" thread. Cheers ![]() |
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bjbdbest
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Poetry is as much human as universal Thanks very much. Waiting to read more from you and others in that "poetic" thread. Cheers I'm happy to see this thread re-activated and hope the sensibilities of others entice more submissions. Although we are dedicated to crunching and helping to eradicate disease, hopefully, this thread can continue to be an oasis for creative aesthetics and pleasurable reading ![]() |
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NAP2614
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Here is a poem that needs reading over and over, until you see all that it offers, has nothing to do with apples.
----------------------------------------After Apple-Picking by Robert Frost My long two-pointed ladder's sticking through a tree Toward heaven still, And there's a barrel that I didn't fill Beside it, and there may be two or three Apples I didn't pick upon some bough. But I am done with apple-picking now. Essence of winter sleep is on the night, The scent of apples: I am drowsing off. I cannot rub the strangeness from my sight I got from looking through a pane of glass I skimmed this morning from the drinking trough And held against the world of hoary grass. It melted, and I let it fall and break. But I was well Upon my way to sleep before it fell, And I could tell What form my dreaming was about to take. Magnified apples appear and disappear, Stem end and blossom end, And every fleck of russet showing clear. My instep arch not only keeps the ache, It keeps the pressure of a ladder-round. I feel the ladder sway as the boughs bend. And I keep hearing from the cellar bin The rumbling sound Of load on load of apples coming in. For I have had too much Of apple-picking: I am overtired Of the great harvest I myself desired. There were ten thousand thousand fruit to touch, Cherish in hand, lift down, and not let fall. For all That struck the earth, No matter if not bruised or spiked with stubble, Went surely to the cider-apple heap As of no worth. One can see what will trouble This sleep of mine, whatever sleep it is. Were he not gone, The woodchuck could say whether it's like his Long sleep, as I describe its coming on, Or just some human sleep. ![]() |
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bjbdbest
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Indeed, NAP2614 --
----------------------------------------A sage analogy. In his poem, After Apple Picking, the poet muses upon normal tiredness or a strange foreboding of an endless sleep. He also realizes that there still remains things undone. Does the end of the harvest relate to impending death? I believe so. There are many facets within this poem, but I've only read through it once. I will surely read it many times more. What have you gotten from this? Would appreciate hearing from anyone else with comments about Robert Frost's "After Apple Picking". Great poem - Thank you once again, Neil! ![]() |
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NAP2614
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One could write a multiple page report on this works. Every line or two or three changes thoughts from past to present to future to what might be. As one said fact, dream, labor and knowledge all in one. He appears to not be content with his achievements in life and being elderly, dreams of what might have been, and not certain if what he thinks he knows, in all actuality, is or not true.
----------------------------------------I think the woodchuck line is about resting up for a time, and return to do better than before, or die in his sleep and not care which. He evidently thinks he missed the boat numerous times calling them fallen apples that are worthless. It is quite catchy watching the tenses change as we proceed through the lines. ![]() |
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bjbdbest
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Yes - I see what you mean, NAP2614. Nice interpretation. Seemingly simple but complex
----------------------------------------working of the poet's state of mind - brilliantly executed. Frost wrote about the complexities of life along with acceptance of its burdens. Here's another example: Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening Whose woods these are I think I know. His house is in the village though; He will not see me stopping here To watch his woods fill up with snow. My little horse must think it queer To stop without a farmhouse near Between the woods and frozen lake The darkest evening of the year. He gives his harness bells a shake To ask if there is some mistake. The only other sound’s the sweep Of easy wind and downy flake. The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep. |
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David Autumns
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Just placed an order with Amazon
----------------------------------------ISBN13: 9780871401526 Looking forward to Wednesday Dave -- I couldn't sleep last night. I drove to a place called Malham Tarn Crystal clear sky, my way illuminated by the Moon. Absolute silence. Above me the streak of the Milky Way. It's been years. The clarity. Richard E Byrd - Polar Explorer - not a poet, but an occasional poet in prose, says it best (not the first time I have quoted this on the forum) I paused to listen to the silence. My breath, crystallized as it passed my cheeks, drifted on a breeze gentler than a whisper. The wind vane pointed toward the South Pole. Presently the wind cups ceased their gentle turning as the cold killed the breeze. My frozen breath hung like a cloud overhead. The day was dying, the night being born but with great peace. Here were the imponderable processes and forces of the cosmos, harmonious and soundless. Harmony, that was it! That was what came out of the silence a gentle rhythm, the strain of a perfect chord, the music of the spheres, perhaps. It was enough to catch that rhythm, momentarily to be myself a part of it. In that instant I could feel no doubt of man's oneness with the universe. The conviction came that the rhythm was too orderly, too harmonious, too perfect to be a product of blind chance that, therefore, there must be purpose in the whole and that man was part of that whole and not an accidental offshoot. It was a feeling that transcended reason; that went to the heart of man's despair and found it groundless. The universe was a cosmos, not a chaos; man was rightfully a part of that cosmos as were the day and night. That from a weather data gathering scientist at just beyond 80 degrees South(!) Dave (again) ![]() [Edit 1 times, last edit by David Autumns at Sep 15, 2013 10:56:20 PM] |
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