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Re: Poetry - just poetry ....

Absolutely lovely -- Thank you, NAP2614!
What a wonderful gift to post that poem
on Mother's Day.

Mother of Mine

To give so much

To give and give

Of heart and strength and mind

Of blood and tears and

sweat and years

To give and never mind

A hand that comforts at a touch

To lift away a pain

That understands a troubled heart

When words cannot explain

And does and does

And loves and loves

Seeking no return

Always caring

Always bearing

Steadfast as we learn


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Long Hot Summer

Nasturtium in disorder twigs
the've all moved on, even the young called
Get-off-that-bed! She's never sprinkled;
the borders going to the dogs;
at Surfers', oiled and dunked and eyed
and grilled, girls make for drinks and shade.

Judith Rodriguez sad
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Re: Long Hot Summer

Sorry, NAP2614 - Try as I might, cannot glean exactly what the poet is trying to communicate.
I get the dog humor and the beach inference, but last line - "girls make for drinks and shade" is lost on me. confused
Please enlighten me if you can. Thanks.
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I received one answer and will let you know when another arrives. It is believed to be a shortened, slang version of making tracks. Informal as to go, depart, in a hurry towards something, or away from something. The girls are getting drinks and going to drink them in the shade.

From Australian Poet Library
The Macquarie Dictionary has the following definitions:



24. (US) to accomplish by travelling, etc.: to make one hundred kilometres an hour.

25. to arrive at or reach: to make a port.
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Life felt so good while you were here.
Too everyone you are so dear.
Until you come back we all feel so blue.
Come back little mermaid.
We all still wait for you.
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Another week of 100*F plus, brains are boiled, so started yearning for Fall.



The Autumn

Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1833)


Go, sit upon the lofty hill,
And turn your eyes around,
Where waving woods and waters wild
Do hymn an autumn sound.
The summer sun is faint on them —
The summer flowers depart —
Sit still — as all transform’d to stone,
Except your musing heart.

How there you sat in summer-time,
May yet be in your mind;
And how you heard the green woods sing
Beneath the freshening wind.
Though the same wind now blows around,
You would its blast recall;
For every breath that stirs the trees,
Doth cause a leaf to fall.

Oh! like that wind, is all the mirth
That flesh and dust impart:
We cannot bear its visitings,
When change is on the heart.
Gay words and jests may make us smile,
When Sorrow is asleep;
But other things must make us smile,
When Sorrow bids us weep!

The dearest hands that clasp our hands, —
Their presence may be o’er;
The dearest voice that meets our ear,
That tone may come no more!
Youth fades; and then, the joys of youth,
Which once refresh’d our mind,
Shall come — as, on those sighing woods,
The chilling autumn wind.

Hear not the wind — view not the woods;
Look out o’er vale and hill —
In spring, the sky encircled them —
The sky is round them still.
Come autumn’s scathe — come winter’s cold —
Come change — and human fate!
Whatever prospect Heaven doth bound,
Can ne’er be desolate.
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As feelings are leaning towards Autumn, i remember this famous poem of Paul Verlaine (1844-1896) :

Chanson d'Automne (1866) :

Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l’automne
Blessent mon cœur
D’une langueur
Monotone.

Tout suffocant
Et blême, quand
Sonne l'heure,
Je me souviens
Des jours anciens
Et je pleure


Et je m'en vais
Au vent mauvais
Qui m'emporte
Deçà, delà,
Pareil à la
Feuille morte.

Ps/ quoted from Wiki:
"In preparation for Operation Overlord, the BBC had signaled to the French Resistance that the opening lines of the 1866 Verlaine poem "Chanson d'Automne" were to indicate the start of D-Day operations."
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Re: The Autumn - Elizabeth Barrett Browning

Take heart, NAP 2614... the temps will soon moderate as the colors of Autumn don their robes.
Wonderful analogy of life's cycle - the changing seasons, as life itself, indicates things never remain the same.
Thanks again, for a lovely selection! rose

Re: Chanson d'Automne -Paul Verlaine

Another analogy..simple yet descriptively poignant.
Thank you, alged!
[Thanks also for free translators] wink See translation below:

The long sobs
Of Autumn
Wound my heart
With a monotonous
Languor.

All choked
And pale, when
The hour chimes,
I remember
Days of old
And I cry

And I'm going
On an ill wind
That carries me
Here and there,
As if a dead leaf.

Here's another take on Autumn by William Blake.

To Autumn

O Autumn, laden with fruit, and stained
With the blood of the grape, pass not, but sit
Beneath my shady roof; there thou mayst rest,
And tune thy jolly voice to my fresh pipe,
And all the daughters of the year shall dance!
Sing now the lusty song of fruits and flowers.

"The narrow bud opens her beauties to
The sun, and love runs in her thrilling veins;
Blossoms hang round the brows of Morning, and
Flourish down the bright cheek of modest Eve,
Till clust'ring Summer breaks forth into singing,
And feather'd clouds strew flowers round her head.

"The spirits of the air live on the smells
Of fruit; and Joy, with pinions light, roves round
The gardens, or sits singing in the trees."
Thus sang the jolly Autumn as he sat;
Then rose, girded himself, and o'er the bleak
Hills fled from our sight; but left his golden load.
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Thks for the translation. Autumn is really a big source of inspiration for poetry. All know this one: Autumn Leaves
Here is the original:

(Jacques Prévert is a great french poet not a song-writer)

LES FEUILLES MORTES
paroles: Jacques Prévert
musique: Joseph Kosma

Oh! je voudrais tant que tu te souviennes
Des jours heureux où nous étions amis
En ce temps-là la vie était plus belle,
Et le soleil plus brûlant qu'aujourd'hui
Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle
Tu vois, je n'ai pas oublié...
Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle,
Les souvenirs et les regrets aussi
Et le vent du nord les emporte
Dans la nuit froide de l'oubli.
Tu vois, je n'ai pas oublié
La chanson que tu me chantais.

REFRAIN:
C'est une chanson qui nous ressemble
Toi, tu m'aimais et je t'aimais
Et nous vivions tous deux ensemble
Toi qui m'aimais, moi qui t'aimais
Mais la vie sépare ceux qui s'aiment
Tout doucement, sans faire de bruit
Et la mer efface sur le sable
Les pas des amants désunis.

Les feuilles mortes se ramassent à la pelle,
Les souvenirs et les regrets aussi
Mais mon amour silencieux et fidèle
Sourit toujours et remercie la vie
Je t'aimais tant, tu étais si jolie,
Comment veux-tu que je t'oublie?
En ce temps-là, la vie était plus belle
Et le soleil plus brûlant qu'aujourd'hui
Tu étais ma plus douce amie
Mais je n'ai que faire des regrets
Et la chanson que tu chantais
Toujours, toujours je l'entendrai!

REFRAIN


CRÉATION:
* Yves Montand (1950)
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Ah, Autumn Leaves. Merveilleux! Definitely a classic!
Yves Montand - Les Feuilles Mortes

Edith Piaf, Charles Aznavour, Yves Montand sang
"soul songs" that put wings to my heart smile
Enjoyed a concert last November at Carnegie Hall.
It was a program of songs made famous by Edith Piaf.

btw Leonard Cohen, a Canadian singer-songwriter, musician, poet, and novelist
is another multi-talented artist. A sample - here
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