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William - I didn't quite know how to say, thank you, for the gift of
"This Year". The message conveyed was beautiful and very well written.
If you are the author, my admiration - and I look forward to your
continued participation in our little thread here. :)

"€œFor last year's words belong to last year's language
And next year's words await another voice."€
- T.S. Eliot

Awakening

Your casual smile
Those tender eyes belie
An off-hand touch
That lingers just a little while

Inside a warmth that
Stimulates a pain
To reacquaint the heart
With love again

Your voice indifferent
In its subtle guise
Brings back the buds
Of soft and sweet surprise
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Thanks D-Best - I wrote that for my wife on a Christmas card I made her a few years ago. Glad you liked it. It was one of the last ones I wrote - moved to Los Angeles and kind of just fizzled out, figured I wasn't going to be a real poet, though I did self-publish a novel with quite a bit of poetry in it, mine and bits and pieces of some of my favorite poets - including Larry Levis's "Elegy with a Bridle in Its Hand." They fit well with the narrative, and if the very few readers got interested in those poets, all the better. Writing is a very lonely thing, lonelier when nobody reads it.

But hey - I gave myself a chainsaw for Christmas! Wish I could use it to edit myself.
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“The moment of writing is not an escape...it is only an insistence,
through the imagination, upon human ecstasy, and a reminder that
such ecstasy remains as much a birthright in this world as misery
remains a condition of it.”
― Larry Levis
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black sheep cast long parallel lines
needles of light pierce naked boughs
out of the shadows the first frosts are melting
behind closed eyelids, the warmth on your face of the early morning sun
a new day is dawning
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Bright Day
Such happiness was mine
Love came swiftly on flaming wings
Sunlight
Our shadows were discreet
And played about the old oak tree
Alas
They warned us not to meet
To wilt and weep - my heart to die
Despair
Fair day turned starless night
Farewell, fair knight, my love, goodbye
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Love it

When you have to read them twice and then a third time smile

It was beautiful this morning. White over and a clear blue sky. My journey to work now coincides with the Sun just peeking above the ridge known as the Chevin, casting everything in the golden morning light. A day to turn the car around and head into the Dales... Sadly I spent the day staring stressed out at a screen instead.

Beverley I saw the Man himself play this in his set at the Harrogate Royal Hall last night
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wo8U20LicdU

My favourite of the evening was https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3vTj_YB6ys

Youtube doesn't quite make the same impact as 3rd row from the front, centre aisle with a least 2 Kilowatts of front of house - you feel it through you.

If only the seat beside me hadn't been empty.

Walked out into gently falling snowflakes
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Oh wow. Guitar poetry. Where did he come from? Or rather, why have I never heard him, or of him? True, I don't get out much, except into nature.... Thanks for turning me on to this music. I'm gonna download some of his songs and make an album for my wife on her birthday.
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"Guitar poetry" for sure. Those selections were wonderful! love struck
You were fortunate to see him in person, Dave.

A brilliant guitarist from Australia, William :)
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TE has a week old daughter and told us to remember this thought after the show

"It's never too late to live happily ever after"


I was fortunate and the snowflakes were literally the icing on the cake smile
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William here's another Guitar Poet I was lucky to see back in 2011 Bristol Colston Hall

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hyBdkZWw8SM

The sleeve note for this tune says " A love story that it should be but it can't be"

Hope you like it - it's like storm passing through

(I promise my next post will be in the form of verse blushing)
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