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rose rose The Hai Ku thread

This is a hai ku
It has no rhyme or metre
Just three lines per verse

Count the syllables.
The middle line has seven.
The others have five.
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Re: The Hai Ku thread

before the red dawn
my dreams are ethereal
catch a lazy moon
rose good luck
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Re: The Hai Ku thread

A Hai Ku a day
Won't keep the doctor away
But an apple will
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I used to write them
All the day I'd write Hai Ku
Now I never do.

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Re: The Hai Ku thread

Dave McCroskey



the morning paper
harbinger of good and ill
- - I step over it
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Wasting my time here
Playing all these silly games
Beats doing my job

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|'m happy to join
With you in your silly games
Let's both be silly.
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Silliness is good.
Laughter is best medicine
to cure what ails you.
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Sunlight was discreet
Shadows played in unison
This day was awesome.
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Yesterdays magic
Whispering softly to me
Reality bites.
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